aight i like the whole concept of the piece not enough of vocabulary used try to work on that so the piece can seem a little more intellectual u kno and the piece was madd good man keep it up i liked the flow of it and this line was good man really felt it
"Dyin Of An OVERDOSE Is Something Thats Common IN This World (2)
People Cant Get Enough POPPIN PILLZ,So Godz Workin On a New REFERRAL"

so in overall nice work here in this piece man keep up the good work man 1

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