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Old 06-09-05, 06:57 PM   #23
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Voted For: Daubs

This was extremely one sided,as far as content, structure and wordplay go i think Daubs had this one. Punchwise he didn't have to resort to hits below the belt to get his point across, as he still came stronger. I don't know who Lauren is but by the sounds of things Daubs must know her, and personally i don't really think that should be used as a punch. If it had been something less deep then by all means that would've been a decent personal, but i wasn't feelin that to be honest.
Daubs' flow was generally more interesting, while K-Trini kept it a bit too simple, in my opinion.
Lyrically K-Trini didn't really hit the spot, and that closing rhyme was uncreative to say the least. The line about him being anything but invisible doesn't even constitute a decent diss cos, correct me if i'm wrong, but wouldn't saying he IS invisible be more of a diss? as it would've implied that he doesn't get noticed in the game.
Anyway i liked Daubs' verse better because the way i see it, his punches were more clever, especially the closing line.