First off... Shame on you Triple for takin the sig for ILLunatic and I's crew from RB awhile back...

but yeah this is just feedback

Triple... your piece was okay imagery and emotion was lacking due to you forcing this piece and you can really tell that your rushed and forced this piece ... Not really up to par with the rest of your workings.... you structure was good and the story line was okay.... still need work though

Tweety... meh i would say you took this but im just leaving feedback.... your piece was good strong emotion and imagery to paint a mental picture from... very solid piece here man... our battle should be good... Holla