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Old 06-10-05, 05:03 AM   #20
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yo this was an aiight battle....

cass - your verse was a good flow, need to work on structure a bit more, punches were good and i liked the personals... need to also work on ur vocab...

retro - your verse was pretty week.. ur structure was good, flow was aiight but ur punches were sorta weak, so were ur personals..

vass