when it enters your heart, its like your lover
always there for you, when there is no other
music is like God, it relates to all colors
^my favo lines of Valor's verse

to speak your mind through music,
is what the strength provided in the words is for,
and as long as we keep living it, this feeling won't stop,
for we are all the essentials of hip hop.
^my favo lines of Fluid's verse

I feel this is a piece the majority of people on this site can relate to, concept may have been done before but it's still all truth. Emotion was good, how you both portrayed the bond between person and music. It's more of an insightful piece than an imagery piece. You worded different aspect of the possible relationship between a person and music (hip hop), gave enough details and sound expression of entire piece was good.

Keep it up!

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