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Old 06-10-05, 08:20 AM   #14
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Aight DAZ got this.......

DAZ
1. line was an alright opener.... 6/10
2. nice wordplay / nameplay 7/10
3. nice name play still... and wordplay.. 7/10
4. nice punch and name play again.. 7/10
5. nice punch and closer... not amazing but good 7/10

E.C.
1. alright punch..... not feelin the 2nd line too much.. 6/10
2. not bad.. not amazing.. 6/10
3. not a good personal.. and really played line.. 5/10
4. not feelin the last legs line.. its aight but not fittin.. 6/10
5. not feelin the closer... considering fury and glory.. dont rhyme... and the last line aint too good.. 5/10

overall DAZ got this.... he had a better verse.. and it was harder hitting.........

overall.... vote DAZ

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