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Old 06-10-05, 09:32 AM   #15
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Voted For: White Powder

White Powder wack??..... Not a chance kid, at least I battle VETS..*
Look at your stats 15-3 against kids who haven’t hit puberty yet..*
6...concept is getting a little played but still alright for a laugh, good opener.
Diss me on stretchin, you've done it more than kirstie allie’s waist..*
How you ill? Wen kids wit losing records r the only ones ya faced..*
7...personal again, nice concept with the kirstie allie shit, that was funny as hell.
Rookie of the Year? No one voted for u, its clearly self-proclaimed..*
You took your name from a signed rapper. you should be ashamed..*
5...ok, not feelin this, the second line sort of ruined it cuz it seemed too basic.
Afraid to b weedless? but he aint touched a g, not even a cigarette..*
“Jersey” aint got nothing, im straight “heat” hittin nothing but “net”..*
5...not feelin the self-glorifying in the second line, no one does that anymore.
Every bar personal, u got bout as much to say as typin wit space-bar..
Call blaze palindrome cuz ya shits the same side to side like racecar...*
6...decent closer, a new concept i aint seen before and you played wit it nicely.

OVERALL: 29/50



I 'Twist U'r words around' like i got Ur 'Tounge Tied' Till U'r intestants-rip
& 'SLap U'r ass Backwards' like gettin hit by a 'Dislexic-Pimp'
5...weak, forcin ya wordplay still, and also the 2nd line makes no sense, do you know the meaning of dyslexia - it means you can't read or write, nuthin to do with slappin backwards.
He's just too Punie to move-ya'll, while Blaze is just too raw
P couldn't 'Pack a Hard Hit' if he threw a SLedge hammer in a U-haul
5...decent concpet in the 2nd line but borderline self-glorifying in the 1st line.
Pop-heat & could 'Mix concrete wit ya tounge' & U still couldn't 'Talk-the-streets
Cuz i'll 'Beat U in the Booth' like 'ass wippings in a slide in restraunt-seat
5...kinda funny, although you stretched it like fuck, also the first line concept is getting played now.
I'll 'blow out U'r spine' like Speakers on your kneck
my Flow 'Gets rid of P' So You'd think I used 'Toilet cleaner in my Text
7...WERD!!! LMAO!!! 2nd line was funny, good playin on his name and shit.
Man! your Ass-text Sees U'r death, Funeral & blood Bath-Next
Till I 'Smash your "Car-Rear"' like 'Driving Crash-Tests...
4...WEAK!!! that car-rear shit is near enough the same shit that Daz has used before, you just changed the ending.

OVERALL: 26/50



ok, this was an ok battle....
i think white powder took it with more consistensy, he brought personals in nearly every line, his punches were funny, although a couple of weak ones with played concepts....decent wordplay, but basic in other places....
young....doesn't look like ya came with ya best here...still forcin that wordplay, ya need to stop doing that...also the use of the dyslexia line was confusing cuz to me it sounds like ya aint fully aware of the meaning so the concept was fucked....ya was consistently average in this battle, bar that closer which was weak as fuck.....

V/ - White Powder.
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