Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

chitown.....
ya drop was wack.....
i mean the fucked up structure throws it off completely, i can't even tell where ya rhymes are or if you stuck to the line limit, the flow was shitty, even with the basic ass multies you threw in the mix.....wordplay was non-existent - as in there was none at all.....did you have punches, maybe a couple of near punches, but really ya just doing a lot of shit talkin to me and not good shit talkin, ya rhyme scheme itself was wack, basic as hell so ya need to get more complex with that shit, no creativity and an overall weak spit.......3/10

lyrical.....
ok drop here mayne.....
structure was tight as hell, the whole flow was cool, everything went well throughout....opener was dope, HIV lines getting kinda played now, but you made a good punch and the rhymin was well complex....punches and personals were in there, some not so hot but then others were fire, ya wordplay was nice although the speechmarks in places make it seem forced, vocabs was tight like hell, multies were in there to, creativity was ok, although a couple of played lines, all in all a nice drop........8/10

^^ some of the best i seen ya do.....

V/ - LyricalMa$tamind


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