Voted For: iLL as a killers grill®

Vote: Nostradamus

Daz: you approache dthe topic from well a typical angle there was no originality, your verse is solid to a degree, but there is a lot of half-rhymes in this, i.e stuff that rhymes but not all the way if u feel me, vocab was cool, id say you needed mre creativity and more to challengethe reader

Nos: I like the way you structured this, was diffeent initially i thought u had exceeded line limit, the dots at the end of every line got annoyin, vocab was used well and effectively, i liked your topic approach, about well basically a person became at what most regard as the end of thier life...dopeness...shit had me thinking on the real

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