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Voted For: E.C
Ackrite
Establish This..Your A Fagget Bitch, Need Straight Eyes 4 Seein
Said It Yaself, You Gain NO RESPECT....& Admitted It In A PM!
^ can't access ya PM box...shoulda quoted it after the verse...coz this link is wasted...effected bar too
Nigga Why Waste Time On Losin...Cuz Beatin ACT Ya Cant Do
Outcome Of Our Battles Ya Birthplace Backwards...Imma K-o U! (U.K....K.U.)
^ Wordplay on UK is mmm ok...an aight bar...kinda self-glory though
Meetin Up Wit Ya Boyfriend Lata?..Figured I'll Help The Situation
& 'Rain Bows' On His Body to Get Him Dressed 4 The Occasion!
^ Blah gay bars played...creativity needs to be upped
Diseased As A Young Child So In His Mind, Infection = Relation!
Ya Raps Travel...Cuz Their Forced Here Like Rapist Immigration!
^ ok bar...an aight punch nuthin to make me go OHHH though
My Verse You Datin.....So 'ACT Formal' Lyke DIRECT Invitations
Ya Brain Misplacement
.................Caused 'PURE Cockiness' Lyke Water Ejaculations!
^ closer isn't dope...ok...but coulda been better
Overall
Just an average verse really rhymes flow & structure good jus punches were meh/ok and opener was ruined coz of no access to ya PM box...average at best...needed work though
E.C's Verse
you "choke" n' squeem, at the site of the glock ready to bust,
Ackrite got "athsma"?...... You'd be better off biting the "dust",
^ Opener better than 1st verse 1st line a lil meh though but punch/diss on point
The only way you got the record was from winning pussy fights,
How am i meant to lose a battle wit a Marques Houston lookalike,
^ good personal...slight self-g though...
Your "Atkins" lyrics must be "burning calories on us Emcees"
Must be you who's losing weight,
....................... coz you could never be phatter than me,
^ blah self-g punch wasted diss there Atkins thing bought this up though
I'm all up in your face, like fat bitches wearing thongs,
You off the hook? i garentee that was just a string along,
^ lol best bar of battle so far IMO 1st line a lil used now though 2nd line picked it up
You aint worth shit... fuck, i dont know why i bust a vein,
Coz delivering glass is the only time u bringing the pane, (pain)
^ Good closer nice wordplay...punch...ok...good closer...
Overall
E.C ya got this...only just though...basically more effective on punches again not much OHHHH standard but enough damage was done to pick up the win...
V/E.C...no RTF required as E.C dropped a vote in Got Skillz...so this is my RTF
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Originally Posted by High Dro
furthermore, june 3rd is the only good day to be born
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^ Amen Brother ^
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Originally Posted by ∆ P E X X
i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.
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R.I.P OMB
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