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Old 06-10-05, 11:21 AM   #17
Daubs
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Voted For: Young Blaze

White Powder wack??..... Not a chance kid, at least I battle VETS..*
Look at your stats 15-3 against kids who haven’t hit puberty yet..*

MEH DECENT ENOUGH OPENER

Diss me on stretchin, you've done it more than kirstie allie’s waist..*
How you ill? Wen kids wit losing records r the only ones ya faced..*

NICE PERSONAL,BUT PUNCH NOT CREATIVE.

Rookie of the Year? No one voted for u, its clearly self-proclaimed..*
You took your name from a signed rapper. you should be ashamed..*

nOPE, NEEDED WORDPLAY IN THIS BAR I FEEL.

Afraid to b weedless? but he aint touched a g, not even a cigarette..*
“Jersey” aint got nothing, im straight “heat” hittin nothing but “net”..*

YEAH PRETTY NICE, GOOD FLOW.

Every bar personal, u got bout as much to say as typin wit space-bar..
Call blaze palindrome cuz ya shits the same side to side like racecar...*

GOOD CREATIVE PUNCH AND A NICE CLOSER.

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I 'Twist U'r words around' like i got Ur 'Tounge Tied' Till U'r intestants-rip
& 'SLap U'r ass Backwards' like gettin hit by a 'Dislexic-Pimp'

HAHAHA NICE OPENER GOOD WORDPLAY.

He's just too Punie to move-ya'll, while Blaze is just too raw
P couldn't 'Pack a Hard Hit' if he threw a SLedge hammer in a U-haul

YEAH AGAIN GOOD WORDPLAY.

Pop-heat & could 'Mix concrete wit ya tounge' & U still couldn't 'Talk-the-streets
Cuz i'll 'Beat U in the Booth' like 'ass wippings in a slide in restraunt-seat

PLAIN DOPE, WAS FEELIN THE WORDPLAY IN SET UP AND GHOOD PUNCH.

I'll 'blow out U'r spine' like Speakers on your kneck
my Flow 'Gets rid of P' So You'd think I used 'Toilet cleaner in my Text

HAHAHA NICE, ALTHOUGH CONCEPT IS A KINDA PLAYED.

Man! your Ass-text Sees U'r death, Funeral & blood Bath-Next
Till I 'Smash your "Car-Rear"' like 'Driving Crash-Tests...

MEH NOT HARD PUNCH BUT GOOD CLOSER.

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Both ok verses, but WP tried too hard if you get me.
Too many explinations and links although wp came with personals like fiyah, blazes verse flowed a lot better with multies and imo had more creative harder hitting punches WITH A LOT BETTER WORDPLAY THAT HAD ME LAUGHIN.

GOOD BATTLE NO HATE,
BLAZE RTF, OR THIS VOTE WILL BE DQ'ED.
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