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Old 06-10-05, 11:33 AM   #5
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I like how you both have different styles, I feel this gives an extra touch to the piece you know because a collab gets boring quite quickly if both writers have same style.

Both verses were packed with pure and raw emotion, excellent imagery and just deep, insightful words. I love the concept you guys are using because today you gotta look like a fucking model or w/e to get noticed, act or dress a certain way to get respect.

My heart is broken but held together by another’s fingertips
I am not a doll that can be sculpted to your fantasy
My flesh is not your palate to touch and taste then throw away
My eyes cannot be shattered and blocked from the truth
^my favo lines without a doubt, I could relate to this shit (unfortunately)
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