Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz

soulja: opener was weak...most of ur barz were very basic...work on metas...and wordplay...use personals...try and deversify all of your lines a little bit...overall i say ur verse was a 5/10...

kon.: nice opener...structure was a little weard...metas and wordplay were good...personals werent there at all...u had a good variety of wordplay that made the verse fun to read...overall i give it a 7/10...



v/ kon.

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