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Old 06-10-05, 02:35 PM   #8
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Voted For: King Solo

ok solo this was a dope verse......
punches were on point flow was dope very easy to read
vocab was good and your personals hit perfectly
wasnt at all strected or tha lines werent forced which took this one easily for you

stanza....ight verse but punches didnt flow together
so that made tha flow off vocab was ight punches also didnt hit directly like solos sum good concepts there thou
very simple to like in and inn overall this couldve been much better ive seen way better stanza stay up famz
but vote=solo
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