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Voted For: pictureperfect2
oh don't shoot!... haha i'll play ya game and maybe even a gag
turn this 15 yr old boi's 'gat' around and let him play some 'tag'
6...LoL!! nice concept and good punch here, nice opener.
avy got a g wit a gun, but u aint a thug all u've done is 'packed' fudge
cats in e.f. see talent easily so it aint ironic ya names all scratched up
7...wordplay was nice, at first i thought you was calling him talented, but then i read again, nice punch.
u aint the best i'll rip ya flesh seein ya bones way before ya talent
cuz ya skill level is at zero... even your dumb ass can count it
5...not feelin this line.....rhymin is off a touch.
so homeboy whats the dilla? u sure aint no 'Killa'... do you just 'Rob'?
cuz u bite lines from from 9 to 5... is it stealin? or is it your job?
6...decent punch, a good concept with the 9 to 5 shit.
im the one to 'shatter' ya dreams then cut ya ass with the glass
cuz you suck even more than all the bj's i've recieved in my past
5...not feelin this, talkin about you getting BJ's was kinda gay.
OVERALL: 29/50
u silly boy...
ima bomb ya whole exsistance, us street desciples hang wit Tical smart thugs
we'll watch pictures blow up in smoke just like his avatar does
5...ok personal....not really feelin the setup to the punch though, it was kinda weak.
U made it to my second line, you can brag, ur worth it
its funny cuz everytime pussies compliment themselves, they always say that they're "Purrrfect"
4...this was gay, that whole pussy concept was really wack and childish.
but you less than a God, son... the nas pic represents your sadness,
but you just spit retarded shit, man, there's no method to your madness
5...too basic to be real hard hitting.
God's son took sin, and you could get ya whole wig pushed in
we do pictures straigh, ya body get tacked to tha wall like push-pins
5...ok concept, not really used as an affective punch.
girls walk str8 off from this man like how he put in his post
cuz fuckin you is a joke... why you think he put it in quotes?
6...finally a decent punch, i was feelin the 2nd line on this, first was kinda wack.
OVERALL: 25/50
ok drops from both....
picture came more consistent...
had some good concepts for punches and used them well, flowed nicely, personals were on point, some ok wordplay in there but still cud be a little better....
rob was consistent, not hard hittin with the punches though, had that nice closer, but mostly you were either too basic or just no real punch in ya bars.....
V/ - pictureperfect2
RTF!!! on the marv, stanza, or daubs battle.....links in my sig..
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