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Old 06-10-05, 04:21 PM   #32
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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

damn close battle........

barz......
the flow was dope....structure was on point....creativity in some of the punches was high, i was feelin some of them, some nice personals on him....wordplay was there and it was dope, i feel that ya rhyme scheme went basic in places but mostly it was all dope....LMAO at the closer, that was a funny and original play on his name....links are played but i still checked them...better off explainin that shit at the bottom instead of linking shit.....overall....8/10

morse...
nice drop to....structure was good, i was feeling the flow all the way through...first thing to mention is drop the whole bolding names thing unless it has a point, from where i look it just seems like ya forcing shit.....ya wordplay was nice, a good personal on his picture to finish with, i laughed at that...creativity was there although you to were basic in places, need to stay more consistent with the hotness.....overall 7.5/10

barz edged it by a hair.....

V/ - Barz of Steel

RTF!!! battle links are in my sig.
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