Don't Even Think About It
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Voted For: Tony Green
Wow
I have to go with Tony Green on this
Really feeling his story much more than Compose's verse. Better vocab, imagery, and more emotion was put into it. I also feel that it went with the topic better. Compose, your verse was weak IMO man, I wasnt feelin it too much. It would've been closer and a better verse from you if it wasnt for your ending. It seems like you just ended it in the middle of the story, and that is a huge no-no
V/ Tony Green
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