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Old 06-10-05, 07:15 PM   #22
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Voted For: Tony Green

Wow

I have to go with Tony Green on this

Really feeling his story much more than Compose's verse. Better vocab, imagery, and more emotion was put into it. I also feel that it went with the topic better. Compose, your verse was weak IMO man, I wasnt feelin it too much. It would've been closer and a better verse from you if it wasnt for your ending. It seems like you just ended it in the middle of the story, and that is a huge no-no

V/ Tony Green
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