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Still Tipping (K-Trini Diss)
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06-10-05, 09:14 PM
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Yo to be honest i wasn't really feelin this. Thats not to say this was a terrible piece, but i think it needed a lot of work on structure and the addition of advanced vocab in place of basic words would've benefitted this piece immensely.
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