Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

This ain't even a battle to me,cause ur one a my fans/
You couldn't smoke an emcee,with tobacco in his pants/
3...weak, setup was gay and basic and the punch itself was played to fuck.
U like a pencil sharpener,cause you waste pencil lead/
Doc say ya need a new kidney,so ya break a childs leg/
*Kidney-kid's knee
4...first line, what the fuck is that s'posed to mean, 2nd line was ok i guess.
Now look at wat you did,I' can't even hear myself speak/
Cause your rhymes so boring it's put my ears to sleep/
3...damn!!! rhymes puttin people to sleep (HOW ORIGINAL) damn that is some of the most played shit i ever seen.

OVERALL: 10/30


You certainly aint no Man, ur pussy, all u ever do iz Wyfe Beat*
Cook whack beef in a easy bake oven, so how u expectin 2 bring Heat?**
5...not really feelin it, the wyfe beat concept dont really work unless miss pimptress is married to him, and the 2nd line was on a played concept.
Take a seat, learn from the master, nope i wont-Blast-Ya
Elevation course is a 1 horse Race, wit me Flyin-Past-ya
5...again, i get the concept and the wordplay is good, but you seem to be self-glorifying.
U come up shorter than the Jockey, Racin without a Whip
Bitch ur nothin more than a Sodomized Teen..Cuz u juz been Ripped!
7...DAMN!! LMFAO!!! that sodomized teen shit was funny as hell and original.

OVERALL: 17/30

not the best battle....
k-trini....ya still comin with no punches and basic played concepts, wordplay is not there, no creativity, just weak shit, either elevate ya game or dont battle....
khaoz, not the best i seen from ya....from what i can tell ya took it easy on this guy, ya got away with it but ya still shud always bring the heat just in case.....nice wordplay, lay off them played concepts and for future reference....don't self-glorify.

V/ - Khaoz


RTF!!! marvjay battle....links in the sig.

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