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Old 06-11-05, 07:48 AM   #11
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Voted For: King Solo

whut girl in her rite mind would marry dis cat,dat cant actually rap.
solo dumb he thought puttin "money on a fitted" was a "salary-CaP".
^wuznt feelin da opener, pretty basic 4 a mc ov ur level

nun of ya battles got me browsin,ova 50 wins datz whut got me wildin.
ppl me ask me is solo "iLL" & i said "Na-Na" like "foxxy's album".
^decent concept dawg

if u lost ya mind yet ya gonna lose it,face it u wasn't born 4 music.
ya audio's a be borin stupid,solo's CD im really lookin (fast) FOWaRD 2 it.
^not feeling it, wording ov da lines wuz weak

solo's a kid aint a part of em grown,gota alot of hate 4 marv in his bones.
u aint a "king" ima call u "PRiNCE" cuzz u'll always be da "artist unknown".*
^i aint mad @ dat, datz hot

u got da ryhme scheme of a kid whut user 2 ur gay bar's do please.
cant cum up with nothin new he stay on "writer's-block" like "jr-groupies".**
^first line wuz wack but da 2nd wuz fyre

Decent verse marvjay, few linez let u down, it aint da best i saw frum u but it wuz iight dont get me wrong. a lil inconsistant wit ya punches datz why my vote goes 2 king solo, good job though dawg


Skillz are lackin son…like tha flag in ya sig man this star is all faded..
I mean on a scale of 1-to-10…wait, looks like “zero” never made it..
^Ok hit. playin off da signature i aint mad @ dat yo

Like ‘homicide party games’ this bitch gets murdered just for fun..
But half ya quote is right…when shit jumps off the ‘Queenz Bitches Run’..
^Good first line, 2nd line wuz da weakest line in yo verse.

Being ‘under’-‘dogs’ gets you on top, Marv’s motto to get to 1st place..
Well………I guess that explains why Marv lets his mom sit on his face..
^momma lines iz usually played but u used da concept 2 good effect

Ya keep spoutin off dumb shit, ya gone end up a mental home resident..
Like ‘Queenz Run Shit!’..and here I thought the US was run by a President..
^datz real nyce personal, im frum Cali so i totally agree good pun

Contradiction of yaself..whilst ya ego is large ya skillz are more atomic.. *
Marv’ll kill me..ya can’t spit, so what ya gone beat me wit an X-men comic..
^nyce creative wordplay off da name, good clozer dawg


Syck verse, yall 2 both had good wordplay. king solo had da more consistantly dropping punchlinez. if marv wuld ov dropped a few better personalz he wuld ov had da win. but he didnt so mah vote goes 2 da morwe constistant wit da punches king solo
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