Voted For: Dizzee Rascal
Nobody to save ya, please quit rap do the whole site a favour
Im ya saviour, but ive seen better whole/hole punches on the margin of a paper..(oh shit!)
6...cud've been better if not for the setup, i seen that kind of line before, the hole punch concept was original and dope.
Give this cat a fright, ima nozzle my glocks just to watch my attack spray
Claim to be tight, but my knifes in ya spine leave witz-un-tied/whitsuntied consider it a holy-day/holiday
7...DAMN!!! LoL!!! wordplay was tight in this bar, props to the originality to.
Charging, as like books in africa ur knowledge is starving
Im barging, paper cut ur eye lids so you see im winning by a margin
6...rhymin wasn't perfect, but still a good punch and again some nice wordplay.
Wont be found, when my fists 'charge' ur face a brutal pound!
Can't make a sound, put a gun fru einsteins brain to leave 'witz' splattered on the ground
5...kinda weak, 2nd line was stretched to and i wasn't really feeling the einstein concept, its been done before.
OVERALL: 24/40
It's like your wearing turtlenecks, the way my shells surround your head.
Even if Dizzee's was a cheerleader, he still couldn't "Bring It On" in bed.
5...weak opener, the turtleneck/shells concept wasn't used right, and that bring it on shit was gay.
Come on, you can't even get in-line, like your school's cafeteria is closed. *
Growing roses is the one and only time this stupid fool has got hoes(hose).
4...weaker, first line was gay and pointless, not really a punch and the 2nd was weak and played.
Dizzee Rascal couldn't raise the roof....if he was fucking Hurricane Francis.
Just like Rascal was playing monopoly, Dizzee is taking his chances. **
5...not good, the hurricane shit was kinda good, but the monopoly concept was not used right.
You've passed your prime, wasted my time, you're wack --- face it, son.
My true skills are now awake...yours are just being placed in one.
5...weak still, you spitting too basic with no real creativeness in ya punches.
Nobody likes you, your worthless, can only buy girls on payday.
Love is blind...... but she still wouldn't want to look at you, anyway.
4...weak again, the 2nd line just sounded retarded, no hate but that the way it is.
OVERALL: 23/50
weak drop from kein witz.....too basic with the punches, ya need to throw in some nice wordplay to make ya punches more hard hitting, also stop with the played concepts and the pointless retarded lines like that closer....
dizz...nice wordplay again, punches were on point although one i wasn't feelin with that einstein shit, just try to fix ya rhyme scheme...make it a lil more complex and also you could still up ya wordplay some to be even doper
V/ - Dizzee Rascal
RTF!!!! any battle in my sig that you can hit....