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Old 06-11-05, 08:00 AM   #15
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think ya a manuscript master ? well im here to prove your wacker
cuz you always drops wack(wax)like when candles hit the plaster
this battle was a bad move-E(movie)like ya choosen the wrong vid.
so im dropping the 'E' kids, cuz the.C(sea)gets split like mosses did..
easily bruise ya ego to blue from black like a fuckin hockey puck mark
cuz its E.C(easy)to leave C spinning in circles, like damn copy write mark
ya should've stalled, cuz wack n lame is what ya mixtures called...
n after this battle he’ll be leaf-in(leavin)the sight like pictures of fall…

Real nyce verse dawg, good punchlines & wordplay. nothin 2 personal, so u lucky E.C Didnt ether but u bought dem consistantly droppin punches, they wuz hittin in every bar so datz why my vote goes 2 u

the bar in your sig is nice, but still everyone knows that daz is lieing,
you contradict yourself, coz ur verses are the reason why RV is dyeing,*
claiming you "god" stop living in the "clouds" and start to communicate,
coz if you had a "halo" over your head, you could still never illuminate**
i'm leaving daz stumped, i guess i'm knocking down his tree,
your battles are slept, coz it's the only time i'm seeing "Z's", ***
i'll stomp on this faggot, like a dino he's rarer than prehistoric eggs,
not because he's dope but becuase he finishes on last legs,****
whats the point in spittin, aint no one wanna hear your fake fury,
like i demolished buildings, he fell down, all dust and no glory,

Yo da verse wuz iight, opening 2 barz wuz real nyce, then u had da lil fall wit da ''jknocking down his tree'' line 2 da ''last legs'' line, they spoiled yo verse, opening few lines wuz nyce, da closer wuz real nyce, but da bars i pointed out let u down, nyce verse though, good job both yall 2

Vote=Daz

plz return da vote Daz. linx r in da signature
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