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Old 06-11-05, 09:36 AM   #12
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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy



Khaoz Theory:

Ugly nigga, you lookin lyke Omarion..But Nobody Wanna Touch
Verses Never See'n O'z..
..........& Elevetation iz Slow, Lyke ur foots on da Clucth!
Ok..4/10
Nose Spread Across Yo' face, knock off jewllery 2. Now why would u do that?
no blockin wen I Throw ''42 Bullets'' On Ya Back Lyke 'Jerry Stack'
Decent Word Play..5/10
Whack herb, win/loss ratio is shameful, Damn Lunatik, Ur Ill?..lol U Liar
Saw yo' open mic'z..1 post ov feed on each & frum ur e-ho Mizz Fyre
Ok..4/10
Kid, Retire! u can be the first Teen givin it up b4 he hit da Mainstream
Claim Ur Fresh?...Well i guess, its iight bein' a believer ov a DayDream
Ok..5/10
Reppin C.S Til Death? i hope ya krew made a Funeral Arrangement
Ur Last Spit...
...Didnt hit & ended up ''droppin '' on ur Shoe U Derranged-Cunt!
Blah...3/10

Overall: 21/50

Ackrite:

Khaoz Ya Lifes Meanin...Is Worth Less Than A Prostitutes Cleavage
A Heathen...So God Didnt Bless His Lungs & It 'Cursed His Breathin'!
Decent...5/10
Fag Your Not Like The Rest...True Shit...Thats Y Ya Punches Is Soft *
Thought You Had Me In Tha Punchline Battle?...Look At The Results!
Weak..4/10
Answer This Coward...U Got 13 Wins....From Rooks Is Da Question
You ILL?....But I'll Put An 'End 2 Ya Sickness' Like Allergy Medicine!
Ok..4/10
Nigga Ya Cant Defeat Greats, Go Drink Milk....You Got Weak Bones
No One Cares 4 Ya Raps...Shit, Everyone Prefers Your Cell-Phone!
Wack..2/10
Khaoz Has Nothin....Will Be Nothin....Damn, Ya Days Sound Dreary
Wait, Aint This Da Same Fagget.......
Who PULLS TRIGS Since Males Refuse 2 Put Dey 'Cock-In-Theory'!
Ok..3/10

Overall: 18/50

My Vote - Khaoz..Ackrites Verse Feel Off In The End..Both Need To Elevate With Better Concepts and Metaphors.

RTF With My PicturePerfect Battle or This Will Be Removed.

~R~

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