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Old 06-11-05, 09:45 AM   #12
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Voted For: R-Rated

This Aint A Metaphor When I Say Let Me Paint A Perfect Picture of You..
Take Some Newb, Brush Some Played, and Add Some Wack To The Mixture Too..
^not a bad concept, i aint mad @ dat yo

PicturePefect Who?! Kid Your Status On This Site Is Completly Irrelevant..
Your Shit Is More Recycled Than Green Paper Covered With Dead Presidents..
^nyce

I Could Number My Lines and PicturePerfect Still Couldn't Count-R-Punches..
Daum The Note-R-Back Full of Hints..and He Still Couldn't Back-N-Hunches..
^nyce first line second wuz really weak

Watch Restricted Force-Flow This Fag..Like Homophobics Drowning Gay Kids..
Shit This Bitch Can't Even Begin To See My Keyed Verse...Like Rays Hits..
^not bad, seen better frum u

He's As Reliable As Cars With Gas Guages On E...He Quick To Stall Yo....
Cause His Ass Gets Lost In Lines Easliy...Like Books of Wheres Waldo??..
^nyce metta

Good verse, few weak concepts & punz but 4 da most part u came pretty raw wit da flow dawg


Ya crews a laughing stock like if u gave corn a tickle or shake
but like silicon breasts in ya face u don’t even care that they fake
^pretty played, but...i luvd it, really nyce bar

this kids asshole is loose fitted like my jeans and what a crime
R’s talent continues to plunge more than a plumber working over time
^ok metta, nuthin special

it aint a greeting but your hands will be shaking when we meeting
16 bucks for a cd… your not worth 7 like other R-rated screenings
^really feelin dat, decent hit dawg, real nyce

your punches make my stomache hurt after reading your spit
but dont get excited that happens whenever i laugh at stupid shit
^not really feeling it, a lil basic

you say u got a ‘horizon of thoughts’ but this shit still isn’t fair
cuz your mind needs more than a metaphor for your skills to compare
^not bad, i aint mad @ dat pun yo

Vote=R-Rated, juz had a lil more 2 offer in punchlinez, mettas went 2 Picture wordplay wuz pretty equal, but r'z punches really hit hard 4 da most part, both had inconsistant verses but R over shadowed pictureperfect wit da nyce punz
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