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Old 06-11-05, 11:09 AM   #39
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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

Ok diz wuz a close battle, heres my thoughts:

Ya rhymes is weak, please, don't try and fight with me
I'll throw ya "face to the curb", make you "bite the streets"
^played concept in da 2nd line

I like to beef, My nine'll close his eyes with ease
Or I'll clap five, in this wack guy, til his ass lies deceased
^not feeling it

Look kid, all ya shit is played....................................
because the only time you dealing with "heavy barz"
...............................................is when u "liftin weights"
^nyce concept, real good wordplay

I stay "above u".....................................like the "letter T"
So I doubt you will win, I'm sorry to have to clown on this kid
^nyce 1st line, 2nd line kind ov ruined it

But this dude's 14 years old and still sounds like he's 10!!!!!!! *
You're clashin with hell, I'll 'tear your ass' like 'bein smacked w/ a belt
Plus the "only time you could get a win is if you battle yourself! *
^good creativity in da rhymez, personal reallyhit harder, good job

This kid's a bitch, everything you create with a pen is shit
Come on man, I've seen better "(w)rappers" on "Christmas gifts"
^played

I'm sick with rhymes, so kid, you can't win this fight...........
Because ya "style has been played ever since your inventor died!!!" **
^really good closer, i aint mad@dat, proppz

Not da best verse, a few played concepts, da line wit dem personalz & ur closer hit hard, & they get u diz win, ur lucky Morse didnt come better or u wuld be see'n defeat fa sho man, good job though


this cats so wack that he had to cook stu and use black magik
to create barz of steel because he never before had em *1
^weak opener

you think you 'raw'? then im choppin you up like my names 'butch'
my verses are on 'fire' ! your 'godly' ?....................
......well if i sat you on my notepad id bet weed see a 'burning bush'
^ok wordplay, horribly worded

im 'burning this fag' like a straight 'cooking piece of cake'
'barz of steel' with the 'blueprint' shit he 'aint got it made'
^ur weakest bar

like owning 'a scarce penny' steel must not have 'common sense'
stepping to me with that? your crap admit it..............
...................even gave yourself credit to boost your confidence
^not da worse lines i ever saw, concept wuz good

im not hell raiser but yet i use pens (pins) to raise hell
its a shame he became 'barz of steel' just to have 'cells' (sales)
your 'flows about to be killed' cuz this is 'the last straw'
could never be 'raisin' chaos at all........
......like the attempts to lift a 'breast from grandmas'
^very weak barz, wuznt feelin them at all

this dude is 'shit' so stop 'sitting' around cuz im 'sending him in'
battlin his alias's is the only time he can get a win
^good personal, dat wuz ur best bar

hes astounded by my talent i got him branded with a loss for words *6
homie only has 'fake steel' and how you black magik...........
..........when you whiter than a jackson accident gon worse
^culd ov used dat personal alot better, jackson shit iz played yo

Morse if u wuld ov used wat personalz u had on barz 2 better effect, u wuld ov had da win, a few played lines, punz wernt strong, personalz were there 4 u morse, but juz da conceptz u used didnt hit hard, both came pretty weak, no hate ov course cuz i know yall sum talaented dudes, but my vote goes 2 barz of steel
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