ok this was a good topical but hnic had a little more thought into his work dont get me wrong both did their thing hnic just brung more creativity more content and the words and how he described it just brought more of a picture in my mind.
and this line was the best i liked from him
"At that exact moment air careened thru John's throat
He came back alive...Revitalized..cuz..HOPE FLOATS"
so ican tell what he's thinkin and what he ahs in his mind both did a great job but my vote goes to hnic

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