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Old 06-11-05, 02:29 PM   #12
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From: decatur ga
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Voted For: Ghost

Have Ya "down-n-Quick", not up n Runnin like Ya Internet connection
Watch Me KO you With "Votes",But Best Believe Im not Runnin For Election
gud wordplay

Im Steady "Weldin" Rhymez Apart Quick,Cuz Supposely Ya Barz-of-Steel
i Advice You To bring paramedics,Cuz therez Gon Be Dozenz Of -Scarz-to-heal-
playing off d name was gud

Complicationz Of Spitting,Like A Dry MOuth Of a Hard Workin Athletic
You should Retire BEING A ROOKIE,Cuz Ya Lyriks Are Just Plain Basic N Pathetic!
dint like that bar

Use Ya Verse For Basic Teachin,But Use Ya Mettalic Remainz For CONFETTI
Like Jason,But Its a Mic Im Holdin To KILL You Niggaz, Not An Oversized Machetti
not a gud diss kind of played 2 b honest

Have Ya Tongue-Kissin My "Nine",But Im Not Talkin About My "Erection"
Have Ya Cross-sided After This Battle,Cuz ima Have Ya "lookin" In 2 Different Directionz
that wuz okay

your verse could of been bettr u had few dope lines but sum stuff was basic nd playd out yah mean


I done tore this kid, lyrics swarmed this bitch
And please, you about as street, as a forest is
no

So dawg, don't be stupid, ya tough talk'll get beat stupid
Plus ya 'Tough Guy Front' is "Ghost" cuz I "See Thru It"
wakk

I'll put the nine to ya melon and lungs, this fella's a thug?
How? When he wouldn't "Lick A Shot" with the "Shell On His Tongue"
it dint rhyme

So guy stop, this guy's hot? This kid'll get five shots
That'll leave his "casket in the clouds" Thats what I call a "Sky Box"
that was okay

All your punches are half baked, He says he's real, but this cat's fake
So I'll leave this kid's "Body Sitting In a Bag" Like a "Sack Race"
it dint rhym again

This ho will get killed, how is this kid flowing with skill?
When my mama always told me as a child that a "Ghost isnt real!"
okay?

weakk verse mane u had no personalz in d verse nd your punchlinez were very basic

my votes goes to ghost becase his verse had d more better personalz nd punchlines

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