both did a good job in creaitivity i will have to give it to tweety cuz she had different layers and showed that the topic could go on and on so thats a plus for tweety. In vocabulary both had good vocab used and they showed both a lot of emotion in their piece. but both did a wonderful job showin their emotions on the topic but im gon give the vote to tweety for bein more creative in her piece both did good but
v/ tweety for bein more creative

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