Voted For: Twizted.

Nigga you not wreckin-on-lines, that's deception-on-minds
Get A Mirror Image Of Ya Rhymes, That's "reflection-on- crimes"
^good multies, punch was weak

Cuz Wen U Drop Alot Its Like "Mass Murder" Erybody Get Hurt..
Principles On Why U Choose TO Bruise Eyes N Earz Remain Covert..
^not a strong diss

Disperse Ya Rhymes Simply Like 12 Yr Oles At Liquor Stores..Dey UnderAge Drops
In Other Words Dey Are Lyrically Underdeveloped...No One Wit Skillz Wanna Cop
^everythin wuz good up until da concept in da second line ''no one wit skills wanna cop''....it ruined the bar

overral ur verse wuz a little basic, nuthin really hit hard, good wordplay, but ur punz need sum work [no hate]


You Winning Dis Battle Is Like Canadians Winning Ova U.S...
Its Impossible Cuz Only People Who "Deny The Truth" Wear a Vest!...
^good opening line, second wuz weak

Your a Newbie-People Don't Put There Time Into You Hoes...
But If You Don't Stop Lieing-I Think Somethings Gonna Grow To Ya NOSE!!!(Sig)
^ nice pun & playin off da sig

You Capable Of Nothin So Deztructive-Just Water Gun Gats...
Theres Only One Thing Dats Shine-ing On You-And Dats Whats Ya avy HAD!!!..(
^not feelin it

I'll Break You Down-Rip Ya Arm Outta Ya Socket-Just To See Ya Cry...
Den Set Fire To Ya House-Den "Deny The Truth" After You Can Ask Me WHY!...
^naw, seemed forced

I Hope You Learned Ya Lesson-Cuz Theres No More We Can Re-hurse...
I Just Gave You Gore To And Ko And I Freestyled My VERSE!!!...
^^pretty decent closer, nuthin special

Verse wuz str8 dawg, few decent concepts, nuthin 2 personal, few hard hittin punches 2, overall ur verse wuz more consistant

Vote=Twizted

rtf in my signature vs ''ackrite'' or vote will be removed

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