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Old 06-11-05, 06:56 PM   #9
K-Trini
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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

Dis is hard to contemplate...i don't quite understand,
Why dis 8th grader's tryna fuck wid a real man,
^^seemed to glorify..not a real punch
At the start i thought he was a big man tryna test,
Turns out he's still suckin milk out his mum's breast,
^^u said he 8th. grade..now a baby?
That does explain why he can't spell his name right,
Or understand the bigger words i dropped in open mic,
^^get some wordplay or metas
Kid you spit more shite than the contents of your diaper,
Yo i'll put an end to you like Kennedy's sniper
^^1st line was nice but 2nd sucked
Yo blunt pocket knife flows are never gonna cut deep,
The only ones who feel you, got your dick between their butt cheeks,
^^suks...ya got a link proving he got d/r?Or are u makin fake personals
You condone them niggas' dickridin, you fuck g's,
If you ain't have them niggas to depend on you'd be stuck g...
^^terrible closer

I don't have to bother reviewing Khoaz theory's verse because it was good.Souljah...wat are talin bout he got dickriders?Give a link or explanation justifing that.U can't just say he got dickriders unless ya got proof.Neva put fake personals.

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