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Old 06-11-05, 07:15 PM   #15
K-Trini
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From: N.Y./born in Trinidad
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Voted For: FreeZe_In_HeLL

Why Must I Continue To Battle These Wack Monkey Children
This Dude Mad Bcuz My Lyrics Tears him Down Like Buildings
^^wak as fuq
Yo Crackheads Pass Your Dope Down Bcuz its not worth Smokin
This Is a Typed Text Battle Dude....So Why the Hell You Chokin?
^^OK
Well I Thought You hade Some Skills But I Can See Through You
Bcuz You couldnt Add Up To My Skills With my Rymes Times Two
^^wak
Fucking Roachez Easily Everytime You Zoned Out, Come Back To Life
I Screwed N' Chopped Yo Wife Like Houston Music & Paul Wall At The Mic
^^good concept..but lacked execution
Eternity Is a Long time Dude So Pull Out Your Ruler And Lets Measure
His rymes Could be A Ho On The Job and He still couldnt Provide Pleasure
^^terrible

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Fuck a ‘stanza’…u don’t deserve one line in my sonnet
Claims hes ’pro’ but the only winners in ‘NC’ was a ’college’*1
^^OK
Gain some knowledge, get your skill up, and quit bein a fan*2
I guess its hard to break the habit when u named yourself after ‘stan’(za)*3
^^I dun like the 2nd line...but 1st line was good.
I know ‘cokeheads throwin up’ could ‘spit an iller line’ than u (get it!)*4
Only reason u fill the ‘seats’, cause none of rapverse can ‘stand’ u (damn)
^^2nd line was played out...but this was a dope bar
I guess ima be the one to leave a ‘2’ in your ‘losses place’
Cause the only time ya rhymes is ‘tite’, is when u ‘runnin out a space’
^^mediocre
So just put up the pen, and lay ya notebook on the shelf
Cause the only time ppl liked ya ‘spits’ is when u ‘drowned’ yourself *5
^^decent closer

FIH had werdplay and metas that seemed to actually make sence.Stanza...ur shit didn't have execution...some fresh concepts but poor exexution.

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