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Old 06-11-05, 07:28 PM   #13
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Originally Posted by .Barz Of Steel.
WOW at yall voting for H-N-I-C on this one

Propain took it in every category IMO

His verse had more emotion and feeling to it, which is good enough for the win right there alone, and I feel that he used better vocab or atleast did a good job with what he used. Imagery was great, and your verse had alot of depth to it. I was no doubt feeling it.

H-N-I-C, your verse lacked both vocab and emotion in my eyes. It seemed to plain, and came across to me as boring. Try upping your vocabulary a bit, and being a little more creative.

V/ {Propain}

I Second That...
Propain indeed took all catz...
he used better imagery and better emotion and he tried with his vocab and he jus dropped an overall better peice...
My Advice to HNIC is to Make sure U Drop Emotion and Use Some Big Words
V/Propain
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