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Old 06-11-05, 07:54 PM   #13
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Originally Posted by Straight Aim
Voted For: R-Rated

yo this shit hott as fuck...."This Aint A Metaphor When I Say Let Me Paint A Perfect Picture of You..
Take Some Newb, Brush Some Played, and Add Some Wack To The Mixture Too.." damn u wiped the floor wit him and his name...had dope flow and good lyrics..especcially the metaphors..."Your Shit Is More Recycled Than Green Paper Covered With Dead Presidents..
I Could Number My Lines and PicturePerfect Still Couldn't Count-R-Punches..
Daum The Note-R-Back Full of Hints..and He Still Couldn't Back-N-Hunches.." the first line on that was dope as fuck so were the rest but not as good as the first..had dope metaphors again...damn u dont stop do u??...."Watch Restricted Force-Flow This Fag..Like Homophobics Drowning Gay Kids..
Shit This Bitch Can't Even Begin To See My Keyed Verse...Like Rays Hits..
He's As Reliable As Cars With Gas Guages On E...He Quick To Stall Yo....
Cause His Ass Gets Lost In Lines Easliy...Like Books of Wheres Waldo??.."damn....that was just as good..damn u'd be a straight ghost writer...and a good maybe a good rapper havent heard ur shit yet...8.5/10...good..and the other one is kinda out of the picture...a little basic and crooked in punches
but u can work at ur skills dawg....well u got my rating dawg

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wow get off the kids dick... uppin...
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