Thread: E.C vs Daubs
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Old 06-11-05, 08:14 PM   #32
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Voted For: Daubs

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=194585
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yo return the vote...

Predator just battlin high records? ,well I call em cowards..
Your like a naked granny.......your all talk and no trousers!!*

Only people who listen to him are this fools friends..
You say your knot undone...yet are still at loose ends..**

Use the search feature, no blunder or bad facts you'll find..
Put a woodsman in a grater, no wonder he got an axe to grind!!***

Givin blowjobs the only time this bitch is hard and breezy..
Should swap the C to a Z, you know for me this shit is EZ..
^^^all good wordplay but not a single hard punch... feelin the wordplay but u didn't direct the wordplay into punches really...

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e.c-
How can you be above the bar, when you fall off when you set it,
^^^this is like your only wordplay in ya verse and your sayin he sets the bar... thats a compliment.
aslo... your first bar is not a punch... second is callin him unathletic which isn't a hard hittin concept... 3rd bar was a gay punch, never a good idea... and the last bar was a good concept but was way too basic, it didn't have wordplay or nothin, just too simple... u needed to come with more wordplay and better concepts

vote- daubs cuz he was more creative... but need to direct more punches... no hate someone return an honest vote please!!! link at top
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