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Old 06-11-05, 08:25 PM   #14
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Word...this was a nice topical battle...both came with different ways of presenting the imagery...

Pro-had some real nice lines and some cool wordplay too...like....

Shedding light on flows like when you watch and See Oceans
Expressing my movement on the internet, Im dropping E-Motions
and..

Lets just say Im 'currently' 'spitting' flames as Im Burning Verbs
My content stays above water, you just come Slurring Words
^really liked this

but you still came more abstract with presenting the imagery, even though it was more clearer and deeper in a way.....

HNIC- I was feelin your verse wit the emotion n everything and it was a cool drop, but you just lacked the vocab and it didnt have as much depth even though it was presented in more of a concrete fashion...

had some cool lines..

but

V/propain
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