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Old 06-11-05, 11:23 PM   #30
Sik Wit It
 
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Voted For: AckRite

u trash dike..........................ya skills been n da cinerator since last night
ya money dont talk.............................cuz like chris tucker u just act rite?
.. hell no
u was on maury tellin ya story bout how a bunch of nothin got lost u poor b
LoL da onli time ya gurl came..... was wen she was screamn NewKid 'or-G'
nah, this shit was mad-weak here
ya lines soft....................i wuld of gave u props but i wulda been lyin dawg
nah i dont mean 'unplug da clock'..... wen i say give ya rappin sum 'time-off'
decent & ur best line

overall ..shit ur verse was weak.. only 1 bar wasn’t wack but the
rest was... but anyway.. elevate though.. & work on ur structure..
quit with the .................... shit..


Fagget You Losin................Stop Temptin Me, This Devil Takin Ya Soul
Dont Lie!, You A 'Interstate Prostitute'.....Das Y Dudes 'Payin Ya Tolls'!
decent opener
Permanant Cum Stains On Ya Lips???......See What Suckin Dick Did
He Grew Up A NOBODY.....Every Class Thought He Was Da NewKid!
decent
Loser Ya Lifes Time Is Runnin Out, Almost On E.......You Have No Aim
Lose Da Cane, I'ma Have Ya 'MIND DRIPPIN...Like Its 'CRYIN 4 BRAIN'!
wack closer

overall .. u had an aight drop, shit was kinda weak though but ur
punches were pretty-much on point in this battle.. structure was aight
& the flow was decent.. but don’t put ur verse in small-size.. just makes
it look wack like that.. but u took this battle though

..just came harder w/ the punches & all-that
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