This is ok, I like your rhymes,simple yet bring your drop out effectivly. Emotionally it could be alot stronger with more intense vocab.your flow slightly falls off due to a change in structure..
overall this peice is good,but could have alot more change to bring this peice to perfection.
maybe bring some even mutlis thru,that way it will bring something complex to the table,while still focusing on the rawness a the drop!

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