Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

damn wut can i say...this was a slaughter on barz part...

I done tore this kid, lyrics swarmed this bitch
And please, you about as street, as a forest is

damn...nice 10/10

So dawg, don't be stupid, ya tough talk'll get beat stupid
Plus ya 'Tough Guy Front' is "Ghost" cuz I "See Thru It"

a little played...but u made it work...7/10

I'll put the nine to ya melon and lungs, this fella's a thug?
How? When he wouldn't "Lick A Shot" with the "Shell On His
Tongue"

lol @ this...clever...9/10

So guy stop, this guy's hot? This kid'll get five shots
That'll leave his "casket in the clouds" Thats what I call a "Sky Box"

damn...thats just good wordplay!...8/10

All your punches are half baked, He says he's real, but this cat's fake
So I'll leave this kid's "Body Sitting In a Bag" Like a "Sack Race"

tite once again...8/10

This ho will get killed, how is this kid flowing with skill?
When my mama always told me as a child that a "Ghost isnt real!"

wow...a punch about ghosts that isnt played?...who woulda thought...9/10


.Barz.- good everything...wordplay...multis...punches...structu re...it was all flawless...u came hella hard wit all the metas...id be interested to see wut this would sound like on audio...overall nice drop form u...51/60


Ghost-
Have Ya "down-n-Quick", not up n Runnin like Ya Internet connection
Watch Me KO you With "Votes",But Best Believe Im not Runnin For Election

oh...hell no...3/10

Im Steady "Weldin" Rhymez Apart Quick,Cuz Supposely Ya Barz-of-Steel
i Advice You To bring paramedics,Cuz therez Gon Be Dozenz Of -Scarz-to-heal-

meh...aight...5/10

Complicationz Of Spitting,Like A Dry MOuth Of a Hard Workin Athletic
You should Retire BEING A ROOKIE,Cuz Ya Lyriks Are Just Plain Basic N Pathetic!

played...4/10

Use Ya Verse For Basic Teachin,But Use Ya Mettalic Remainz For CONFETTI
Like Jason,But Its a Mic Im Holdin To KILL You Niggaz, Not An Oversized Machetti

thats not a punch...1/10

Have Ya Tongue-Kissin My "Nine",But Im Not Talkin About My "Erection"
Have Ya Cross-sided After This Battle,Cuz ima Have Ya "lookin" In 2 Different Directionz

u cant be serious...2/10

Ghost- u need serious work...mostly on structure...vocab...and wordplay...and this is a battle...no self glorification ...practice and you'll get it...i see potential...

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