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Old 06-12-05, 08:32 PM   #8
Hitchcock
 
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this was pretty hot, alot of emotion in here. props on sayin what u feel n not worryin about whether it was too soft or nothin. you need to make your verse a lil more complex tho, cuz it was kinda basic. i felt the emotion in there and you had some decent vocab, but up ya game a lil more and this would been real tight. I'll give it a 7.5/10. but holla at me about a collabo im tryna recruit niggas for some joints im about to drop.....1......
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