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Old 06-12-05, 09:11 PM   #8
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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

wow, talk about ghost self-gloring/just stupid lines..........for example

'Have Ya Tongue-Kissin My "Nine",But Im Not Talkin About My "Erection"'

^seriously, wtf are you thinking about when writing?

anyways, ghost, you didn't really have any good shit man....it was way too basic, and half the disses had something referring to you, and thats not a good diss man....it wasn't creative at all, and your flow was off a little....like that machetti line was just stupid, how did it exactly diss barz?....anyways, your verse was too plain, not effective, nothing stood out, uncreative......just elevate man, read some tuts or something

barz. not bad man, had some solid disses, some were just plain weak, like the sky box one....but overall, your verse was way better, because you came harder and kept it consistent with dissing....kept it focused on dissin ghost.....that sac race line was pretty solid, opener coulda been worded better, but still a solid one.....for sure you took this one, rtf on the khaoz battle in my sig.

v/barz of steel.
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