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Old 06-12-05, 09:41 PM   #20
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Voted For: Drakel

Wow One sided here...

Drakel took this in every category IMO. LOL at the opener and closer. You came consistent with solid punches and funny personals, and everything connected and made sense.

KhAoZ, I didnt really see anything stick out in your verse. Punches were there, but they just weren't hitting. Wordplay was decent, but could've been ALOT better, and you didn't really have anything creative. Try upping your vocab and being more original. No hate

V/ Kesse

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