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This is my first post!
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IP:
Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.
BOS
Damn Son Had Some Good Shit Dawg, You Had Alot Of Wordplay In Here Which Was Dope You Also Had Some Good Meta's I Was Feeling You Made It Clear On This Battle With Punchlines, Your Closer Was Dope Dawg, Opener Was Dope Dope Though, You Also Had A Nice Deal Of Vocabulary Which Was Good Structure Was Cool Better Then Ghost, Overall You Came Hard With Punches And Wordplay Which Killed This Battle Man
Ghost
Cool Shits Man You Had Some Nice Wordplay Kind Of Creative Here, Aiight Shits, Vocabulary Was Okay, Kind Of Basic But That's Cool Man...Structure Was Horrible, Coz You Had No Rhyme Scheme Here Which Is Real Bad, Syllable Count Was Whack, Stretched Lines Here And There, But The Over All Flow Was Okay Man, Over All You Need To Work On Punches, But They Were Cool Up In Here Just No Hard Enough
Overall BOS Came Harder With His Punches, More Creative With His Wordplay Which Got Him This Battle, Also Structure Was Decent, Vocabulary Came Good, Basically He Got This For Those Reasons
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