So fragile, can't release frustration and ryhme about it,
Wanting to escape... yet I'm still unable to find an outlet..

That was tight

Ok One def got this, better imagery, flow was smooth fru out

Each bang on the glass portrays the lucious statements,
Falling in pits thinking theres glass above the basement

With tight lines like those

Where as iggy was on some basic shit in comparisent

the sun shines in my eyes and i rise
that dream took me by surprise.

flow was tight but i wasnt feeling it u know it seemed too simple
Also one's was more enjoyable to read thats why

vote - one

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