O.V.Dose: strongest aspect of your piece in my opinion was the emotion and how you portrayed the thoughts and feelings of the person. Imagery was there but not that much. Enjoy how you went into detail about the reason of the poker face, different scenes and switching back and forth between several emotions. Flow was decent, bit off here and there, some rhyme words didn't come out the right way and all that. Structure was cool, had few insightful lines in there that made the reader stand still and think bout it, this I liked very much.


Dizzee Rascal: what I enjoyed so much about your verse was how you managed to combine strong imagery and raw emotion, your lines were packed with both aspects that made this an interesting piece to read. Flow was good, kept ya lines rather short, had nice sound expression...this all improves your flow. I like how you approached the topic, based on Satan and such, didn't actually expect any of you to come with it like this so that's was a pleasant surprise. Structure was okay, went indepth on the matter as well, pictured different scenes.

In the end, my vote goes to Dizzee Rascal, he had this edge to his piece, different approach and all that.

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