O.V Dose-

Nyce concept 2 your peice. emotion wuz really strong throughout, not enough imagination in the portrayal ov ur ''poker face''...concept wasnt AS creative as dizzee rascal, but it wuz still strong & pretty insignhtful, culd ov expresed ur lines a lil better in places, few ov 'em were mad stretched so it took the sting out ov the flow as u read along, good emotion, u beat dizzee rascal in dat aspect ov ur peice, but da imagination an creativity ov ur scheme lacked a little..

Dizzee Rascal-

Really nyce drop, emotion culd ov been a lil more deep & meaningful, but styll u got da win, good vocab, nothin wuz stretched each line wuz short & str8 to da point in ur peice, imagination wuz goiod, u had a more creative concept & scheme 2 ur topic thats fo sure, creativity in which u used ''the devil''throughout wuz strong, original...an very very diffrent 2 O.V Dose but datz wat i lyked most about ur peice, real good creativity in ur concept

vote=dizzee rascal

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