OneStepBeyond: for a quickie, I enjoyed reading this piece: you had excellent imagery, I could really picture everything you were saying so that was an extremly strong aspect of this piece. Together with imagery, you managed to combine good level of emotion: raw and pure, feelings and thoughts of person were nicely portrayed. Flow was good, had similar sound expressions, some multis in there...all things that improve your flow. Concept might not be most original one but it was a pleasant read nonetheless.

MC IgGY: you said it yourself you did it in 5 mins and it shows because I have seen far better from you but it's nice you didn't wanna no-show. Your lil drop wasn't too bad actually, had nice emotion and some good imagery, flow was okay and structure was decent. If you elaborated it a little bit, this might have been a close call but now it's sorta one-sided of course.

My vote goes to OneStepBeyond

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