Onestepbeyond-

Not a strong concept 2 ur peice, very basic actually...vocab wuz off, flow wuz good i'll give u dat, creativity culd ov been alot better, little 2 no emotion in it, imagination wuz really good, datz wat gave u diz battle 4 real, diz iz certainly not a ''solid peice'' but ur imagination iz sum ov da best i seen in a topic, u lacked good strong vocab, u lacked complex writing scheme so ur lucky dat mc iggys peice wuz weak.....u get da win easily tho, good job.

MC Iggy-
Not feeling ur topic at all, far 2 basic, vocab wuz elementary, there wuz lil 2 no imagery in ur peice, i juz wuznt feeling anythin at all about ur topic, it iz evident dat it took u 5 minutes, bcuz 2 be honest....it wuz far 2 basic & it looks more like a bunch ov words jumbeld 2gether than complex topical writing.

vote=one step beyond

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