OneStepBeyond - You had great imagery, which is good since you wrote it in 15 minutes. Emotion was just enough to take that category away from Iggy. Your vocabulary was nice, simple yet complicated you didn't overload your verse with intricate words which alot of people do when the ydon't have alot of time. But considering the time strain, you did quite good.

Mc IgGY - Well, your piece was very short so that set you back. Still, it was quite a powerful piece due to your emotion and the way you described actions. Yet you didn't have alot of vocabulary in your verse. Imagery was decent also, I could picture it all.

But my overall vote goes to...

OneStepBeyond.