Voted For: Murdz

meh, murdz took this, luckily the other dude had no REAL punches, both ya'll had no personals....murdz, you coulda taken this easy, if you keep up with lines like this:

if gats-were-words- you'd be left holier than the Bible
I freeze rivals then dance in circles round 'em like a ballet recital
this bitch gunna get jumped on like a worn out matress
his delivery missed me like Fed-Ex had the wrong address

^second one made me laugh, and first line of the first one was good too......thats what you gotta do, think of creative wordplay, then make a punch outta it....dont settle for cheesy stuff, like the tampon line, i've seen what you can do, just keep working man, word

other dude, wow.....your verse had no good punches, that verse coulda been used against anyone....which is pathetic....except your closer, because it was true.....but it still wasn't that great of a personal, i suggest...work on wordplay and vocab first, then develop creative/complex punches, then you should be good, no hate, elevate

v/murdz....rtf

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