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Old 06-13-05, 08:30 AM   #13
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Voted For: King Solo

ahha, this was pretty cool.....and im cool with both so you know this is honest......

daubs, you've elevated quite a bit, but i dont think your personals were as good as solos, and that set-up to your second bar was kinda really stupid, although the punch was creative, your first line kinda ruined it....and your opener was a little weak...but overall, it was a pretty good verse man, for a quick one, i just didn't think you took it, props to ya though, you've come along

king....haha, i laughed at everyline, good personals and thats what stood out....opener was the best, 2nd bar......set up line coulda been a little better.....but still worked, and the finisher was pretty creative too....overall, it was pretty close i think, but you had better personals, so you took this one, IMO....but props to both, good battle......and keep up

v/king solo.....rtf.
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